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A Little Four letter word
Love, what is it? Is it something we want or need Is it something we contain or let out when we breathe How can a Four Letter word have such an Impact on us It’s like someone hit us in the stomach with a bus What is love and Beauty, is it in the eyes of the beholder If you do love some one, have you told her If not, Why? What is it, her twinkling mystic eyes or her luscious angel lips? Is it the feeling of total bliss Is it the feeling of her Smooth Warm skin against you Cold Rough Callused hand She knows if she loves you it’ll never begin But who cares now its’ just innocent love Or is it something more, something deeper What if, What if it was meant to be What if it’s been written in Heaven or aligned in the Stars If she loves you will she love you when there’s no more money or cars So what is this little for letter word that means so much to us and her What is it a word, a phrase, or just something you say to please her Love L-O-V-E What is it????
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Shipdate:20100615(June 15th 2010) 03xx:Infantry contract ![]() Leadership is what you do when no one is looking. Quote:
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Wow.
Beautiful poem...this is a side of you we haven't seen much of, Drill.
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U.S. Naval Sea Cadet Corps ALPO Sea Cadet Seaman NJROTC NS1 Proud Member of Drill Team with Arms Honor Guard Nominee c/Seaman Recruit Last edited by navytrooper; 01-02-2009 at 05:52 PM. Reason: changed "Nice poem" to "beautiful poem" |
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That's deep, man...deep.
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...Applause,Me bowing.... Thank you, Just a little info about this poem:
I wrote it one period before it was due(6th period in my second AJROTC class) and I read it to my SAI and he said I have great talent. My Literature teacher told me to write some more and submit them to the School paper. I am going to do it, when my friend's(In JROTC and out) heard my poem they started laughing because they didn't think I was so deep. My Girlfriend says I am real sweet. I know I have grammatical Errors, I do not have any speellckeck(or word or works). I am just going to do this by my 11th grade Literature level.
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Wel you are going to be disappointed, I do not have a dictionary in my household.
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oh, we have plenty of dictionaries at my house (mom's a librarian...what do you expect)
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Thank you very much, I did not know that site existed.(I could have guessed though).
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11th grade, huh? I'm pretty sure by the 11th grade I didn't depend on a dictionary to get by in terms of use of the English language. The proper use of their, they're, and there were instilled into my knowledge set long before I entered the 11th grade, as well as correct grammar (use of punctuation, reviewing your own work prior to submittion, etc.).
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